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Alright so I don't know how....but looking at this one ghost kid while reading Corped Party gave me an idea for a tutenstein Fan comic so heres the plot so were on the same page cause I don't even know if I'm doing this yet.

Plot: Years after the movie and series, tut and luxor are still at the museum however Cleo has left for collage and a offer to go to Egypt. However tut seems more depressed then normal one night and without his knowing the Egypt gods are granting him a chance to be like normal humans of the time period and kinda un-mummifiy him a little (giving him eyes removing the decomposing smell and his full hair and even ageing him to 13 and placing him in school). However theres a catch he still has specific thing likes lims still can fall off, his skin is still light green and has the crack under his eye and, if he needs to use the septer his body will temporality turn back as a mummy.

But anyway After this he gose to the privit school and is soon plague by Set returns and up to his old tricks. Can tut enjoy his new Life and keep the over and underworld safe?